diff --git a/statements/src/docbkx/Book Content/Book Ecosystem combined.xml b/statements/src/docbkx/Book Content/Book Ecosystem combined.xml
index 4358241..75cc09c 100644
--- a/statements/src/docbkx/Book Content/Book Ecosystem combined.xml
+++ b/statements/src/docbkx/Book Content/Book Ecosystem combined.xml
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@
patients, and readers from all over the world. The collective knowledge from these
stakeholders provided direction for treatment options and, most importantly, kindled the
source of shared hope to bring a sense of humanity during difficult times.
- Another example of the impact of Crowdsourcing or Wisdom of Crowds is the COVID-19
+ Another example of the impact of crowdsourcing or wisdom of crowds is the COVID-19
pandemic. Crowdsourcing was used to track the development and availability of COVID-19
vaccines all around the world and facilitated the 3D-printing of medical supplies, such
as protective gear, masks, face shields, and mechanical ventilators, for healthcare
diff --git a/statements/src/docbkx/Book Content/Book Introduction.xml b/statements/src/docbkx/Book Content/Book Introduction.xml
index 88faed3..36c122d 100644
--- a/statements/src/docbkx/Book Content/Book Introduction.xml
+++ b/statements/src/docbkx/Book Content/Book Introduction.xml
@@ -366,11 +366,12 @@
other industries. Health data is unique in its direct association with a person’s
health outcomes. Nuanced concepts exist in patient care settings creating challenges
for the representation thereof in data capture and transmission. Laboratory testing
- on a specimen involves a plethora of biological concepts which must be represented
- by data in a meaningful way while maintaining precision as well as consumption for
- other entities or systems in the ecosystem. When an association to a patient’s
- health outcomes is combined with such nuanced concepts, exceptional rigor must be
- taken in the maintenance of data precision and representation.
+ on a specimen involves a plethora of biological concepts and different units of
+ measure which must be represented by data in a meaningful way while maintaining
+ precision as well as consumption for other entities or systems in the ecosystem.
+ When an association to a patient’s health outcomes is combined with such nuanced
+ concepts, exceptional rigor must be taken in the maintenance of data precision and
+ representation.
The Size, Scale, and Complexity of the System